WALT write a story with an orientation, problem, solution, and ending, using correct sentences and punctuation
Lost little girl
One day there was a family that moved in to a new house the house was near panmure park.Emma was Carly’s mum and David was Carly’s dad. It was a sunny summer sunday afternoon. Carly was playing outside with her dog Snooki. Carly was running around and Snooki was chasing her. Snooki was running and jumped the fence and Carly followed Snooki. Snooki ran to the panmure park and Carly got lost in the bushes. The bushes was led to the forest. Carly got lost and it was still afternoon. Emma and David went to the park and saw Snooki but did not find Carly. Emma and David called constable Jackson. Constable jackson went to the panmure park with Emma and David. Emma and David look everywhere. Constable Jackson went into the forest and couldn't find Carly. Constable Jackson was yelling Carly’s name “Carly”. Emma David and Constable Jackson were searching for 2 hours. Constable Jackson heard crying near the stream Constable Jackson followed the crying and saw Carly sitting on the rock near the stream. Constable Jackson took Carly back to Emma and David and Constable Jackson went back to the police station and Emma and David and Carly went back home
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